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t-raise us up with Thérèse's avatar

I've transcribed everything down. All four points.

Start with a firecracker.

Expose all. Get naked, keep neat, and no fluff.

Resolve all in 1 quick para.

End with a spectacular gut punch of words.

By George, think I've got it.

t-raise us up with Thérèse's avatar

Your post was neat and comprehensive. I really appreciate what you did, not just the summary, how your focussed on the four main elements.

I taught composition and comprehension to 5 to 9 year olds.

It was so basic by comparison.

Thank you for the short story sequential cheat sheet.

I'm a panster, but I will try to follow your outline and edit to reveal the word jewels inside.

Thank you very much.

Mary's avatar

I'm a panster too. This story structure and outlining does not come naturally to me.

t-raise us up with Thérèse's avatar

Well, as a fellow pantser, your article was brilliant to tick off the boxes of what is and isn't required in a short story. I can't thank you enough.

Rafael Concepcion's avatar

This reminds me of two books I read long ago. One is Revenge of the Lawn, by Richard Brautigan. The other is The Other Side of the Mirror (original title: El Grimorio—in English The Magic Book) by Argentine-American writer, poet and critic Enrique Anderson Imbert. The former consists of mostly very short fiction. The latter contains some longer stories as well. Brautigan was a standard bearer for the counterculture in the US during the 1960s and 1970s but he is best known for his novel Trout Fishing in America. Anderson Imbert was a “magical realist “ in the tradition of Jorge Luis Borges. I doubt that either book is still in print, but you might find used copies on Thriftbooks.

Mary's avatar

interesting I'll have to see if I can track any of them down

Melinda Coker's avatar

I made notes. Hope I can figure out how to translate it to my writing. :-)